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Original: 12/24/2007 3:08 PM
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Monday, December 24, 2007

creative writing week 105

 Turn off that floor lamp, please
Too bright for now
With solemnity like a thin blanket
Surrounding, not warm
Almost intensifying the cold
Come, blind angels, to this place
In the shivering calm comes
Clarity
And the way icicles sound
Like chattering teeth sunk into water
Then, broken crystal stemware
Which will be replaced before next year
There's no hurry

The radio says
"'Tis the season to be jolly,
Fa la la la la
la la la
la"
Come, come contradictions, come
Start out just trying on, trying out ways
To bring about flame
Because the floor lamp is out
And the sun is melting on the horizon
Night is a dark, frightening thing
Wake in it and see
If possible, anyway

Narcolepsomnia
Call it that
And the sound is as cold as icicles
As cold as a thin blanket
Colder than contradictions
When sleep is inevitable
But completely unreachable
Distressed, yes
Restless at best
How unbecoming
How irresistable
Come contradictions
Come and turn out the light
 Posted 12/24/2007 3:08 PM - 55 Views - 14 eProps - 7 comments

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Oh oh oh FUCKING GREAT! I loved it.......
Posted 12/24/2007 4:42 PM by LibranPoetess - reply

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Kick-butt.
Love this.
Posted 12/26/2007 2:17 AM by stargazer_8000 Xanga True Member - reply

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It scares me to think that Jared Leto is a singer period.
Posted 12/27/2007 6:01 PM by MoshPanda - reply

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'the sun is melting on the horizon'

my favorite line
Posted 12/28/2007 6:37 PM by as_a_kite - reply

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heh, Have you never listened to a little Kid playing with Toy Soldiers?

Probably one of the most annoying sounds of Gun Fire, Explosions and cries of death

That I've ever heard.

-thend-

Posted 12/29/2007 1:51 AM by kirbym Xanga True Member - reply

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congrats on winning this weeks creative writing challenge.
if you could send me a prompt ASAP, that would be greatly appreciated.

-ccw
Posted 12/29/2007 12:56 PM by creativewriting104 - reply

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Hello Scott,
You worked hard to make your site simple yet elegant. I see that you really like to write!
I like to write articles about God and religion on my site. I want to help people to really get to know God, especially in these troubled times. Jesus gave us a message of hope that is in the Bible: 14 "When the good news about the kingdom has been preached all over the world and told to all nations, the end will come." (Matthew 24:14) (CEV) I hope you get a chance to look at them.

Posted 1/2/2008 3:04 PM by The_True_Path Xanga True Member - reply


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