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Original: 1/20/2008 4:55 PM
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Sunday, January 20, 2008

Story For a Friend

  Once upon a time there was a little girl.

She lived in a chrome kingdom that was micromanaged by robot lords. The king was a very particular person who had a closed mind. He used his robot lords to keep the people of the kingdom from creating art or anything of beauty, as he feared it could one day incite revolution.

The girl's name was Pistis Sophia, but most just called her Sophia. Her parents were quiet revolutionaries who never gave up the idea of creation and art, so she was named Pistis Sophia, after the Angel of Creation. It was a fitting name, for she spent most of her time scratching small designs into the chrome, only to buff it out quickly when a lord would come by.

Sophia had a hope that one day she would be able to express her art freely. She grew into a beautiful woman, and though her parents died, their ideas lived on within her. She decided one day to appeal to the king to permit even small pieces of art to be created for private purposes. The king became enraged and frightened by her thinking, and threw her into the prison. The prison was not clean like the rest of the kingdom. It was stone, cold, and filthy. Dirt and grime clung to the walls. Sophia was sad, but then she discovered a small fragment of metal in the filth.

It was jagged, unkempt and uneven, but it had a tip to it, which was all she needed. She began to quietly scratch designs into the stone; intricate, detailed creations that truly lived up to her name. She drew a small amount every day for a month; she remained undiscovered because the only contact she had with anyone was for a guard to fling some food through a small slot into the dank room every day.

Then finally, she heard the turning of a key and the echoes of turning cogs throughout the dungeon. The room was filled with light, and Sophia sat in the center of her creation. Her murals covered the walls in every space, flooding the guard's eyes with unimaginable beauty.

And the guard fell to his knees.

And he wept.

The king heard this noise and came storming into the corridor. His face red, his shaggy face trembling, he dragged the guard to his feet. As he opened his mouth to shriek, he turned toward the dungeon. And he fell silent.

And he fell to his knees.

And he wept.

For it was beautiful.
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Visit peasblossomsfaerie's Xanga Site!
you should write faetales more often.
you're quite good.
<3
Posted 1/27/2008 8:26 PM by peasblossomsfaerie Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

Visit llibra's Xanga Site!
but you probably already know that
Posted 2/15/2008 2:10 AM by llibra - reply

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hey just wanted to say hi comment back

-*+*-jess-*+*-

Posted 3/8/2008 2:38 PM by jess_loves_you_x10 - reply


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